雅思写作语法学习:时态
错例 1:Itis obvious that comparing with its drawbacks, the rise of English as aglobal language can bring us a lot of benefits.
很明显的是,相对于它的弊端,英语作为世界性语言的崛起会带给我们更多的益处。(被动)
正解:Itis obvious that compared with itsdrawbacks, the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot ofbenefits.
错例 2:Evidencesuggests that the poor are fail to seek medical treatment because of the cost.
证据表明穷人因为费用的问题而不能得到治疗。(实行时)
正解:Evidencesuggests that the poor are failing to seek medical treatment because of the cost.
错例 3:Airpollution and other kinds of pollution become worse as a result of theincreasing traffic.
空气污染和其他污染的恶化是交通流量增大的结果。
Become 一般用完成时或实行时
正解:Air pollution and other kinds of pollution have become worse as a result of the increasing traffic.
错例 4:Alack of job opportunities restrict school leaver"s independence, either forcing them to remain at home and forcing them to move back home.
缺乏工作机会限制了离校生的独立性,迫使他们留在家里或者搬回家里住。
用将来时态,将会,表意愿
正解:Alack of job opportunities will restrict school leaver"s independence, either forcing themto remain at home and forcing them to move back home.
改错练习:
1. The increasing violence showing in films or on television has sparked public outcry, and some critics have shown their concern on the interplay of social violence and media violence.